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I really like the way that you have manged to set out the tf

Also, I really love the expression that she has, she looks really quite shocked

The way that you have done it makes me really want to become a Flareon, being a fire type would be so awesome ...

I have never seen anyone do that 'fluff' technique as I call it, it makes it look a lot more realistic!

The way that you do it makes it look like it could happen right in front of my eyes!!

This is also my first critique, so suggestions to improve it will be greatly appreciated!!
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you very much for writing the critique; it's very much appreciated. 

You mention a 'fluff' technique, what exactly do you mean by that? 

Also, is there something you could name about this drawing that you think could be improved upon? It would help me very much in improving my drawings. 
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
NP

By the 'fluff' technique, I'm meaning the technique that makes it look like the fur is physically travelling up that girl's arm!

The only thing that I can think of for you to improve is to make it look like the muzzle is physically pushing out, that is all
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Alright, thanks for the elaboration ^^
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
NP
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