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John was a normal 10 year old boy. That liked pokemon but was afraid of the dark. His favourite pokemon were Umbreon, vulpix and pikachu and he always wondered what it was like to live as one. That never came true however, until 2 days ago.

John was playing Pokemon late at night just like any other 10 year old would do when he started to feel a weird sensation over his body. "What's that?" he whispered, curious. It now wanting to wake his parents up. When he looked, he could see nothing, but when he shone a light over it, he found out it was black fur. This black fur started to rapidly accelerate all over his body apart from at the top of his arms, legs and forehead, where yellow circles of fur formed, which then started to glow. After he had saved and closed his game down for a better look, his hands and feet turned into paws, causing him to go onto all fours. After that, his hands and feet adjusted themselves to suit a quadruped. Next, a tail grew out of his rear, covered in black fur apart from a part 2/3 of the way up, which also became a yellow "ring", which then also started to glow. His eyes then turned blood-red and his pupils became slits like that found on cats, enabling him too see very well in the dark. "Hey, I'm becombreon breon umbreon!!" he exclaimed happily as his level of vocabulary became limited to that of an umbreon. His ears then became elongated, all black apart from a yellow, now glowing ring about half way up, and moved to the top of his head. His  nose then became small, black and wet and his nose and mouth pushed out into a muzzle. Finally, his teeth became sharper and he shrunk down to the size and weight of an umbreon as his tf finished.
This is my first tf in a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time, so if there are any mistakes or simple improvements I can make, please tell me and I'll bear it in mind for next time!!
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww, thanks
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tuxedoedcat7675 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
It's great. Is it finished?
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks, but I don't get you're question, what do you mean by "Is it finished?"??
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tuxedoedcat7675 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Nvm. I could not see like half the story for a gew minutes.
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh X3, thanks for the fav tho!!
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww, thanks, I may do another tf story later today
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tuxedoedcat7675 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Great ! That would be amazing!
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Car-lover33 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Would you like me to do one for you??  If so, then give me some options
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